My Back Surgery

Review of My Back Surgery

Authors Note: this is review of my personal narrative My Back Surgery. 

In my personal narrative, My Back Surgery I used imagery. This helped my piece in so many ways . The figurative language really helps paint a vivid picture in the readers mind. Without the figurative language it would be hard to picture this and other stories. I believe that all good authors use figurative language in their stories.

One form of imagery I used was tone in this sentence: as we sat at the kitchen table everyone was laughing and talking but I was scared to death for what the next day would bring. I created a tone of fright. If I took out that sentence the frightening tone would not have been there and you would not know I was scared.

The other form would be mood in this sentence: Once I got home there was a lot of ups and downs in the healing process but I made the best of it. Sort of shows empathy and what it would be like to walk in my shoes if I did not add this sentence I believe empathy would still be implied.

The examples that I used are just a small part of imagery when you are using imagery you need to make sure you use it from the beginning to the end otherwise you will lose your readers attention. But I think that the types of figurative language and imagery I used painted a good picture in the readers head.  

The Trojan War reading response

The conflict was that the Trojans did not know what to do with the horse. The conflict got resolved when they found all the people in the Trojan horse. The most sneaky thing about this story was that they were hiding in the horse. Things can still go on like that today because people are still in wars and still fight and yes it could happen at a school or small work place because lots of people are fighting against that a real word situation this reminds me of would be the bombs at the Boston marathon because they hid the bombs just like the Greeks hid in the horse . 

Ribbons Reading Response

The shoes in the story are a symbol of the girls happiness and the grandmothers pain. The grandmothers culture is so different from ours for example the fact that they had to bow when they greeted each other and she did not show much affection towards Stacey when she first got there she also her feet were messed up because her parents binded them when she was little where we shake someone’s hand instead of bowing in their presence and we are more open to affection then they are and binding feet was not a tradition but most people do things that are extreme for beauty for example cosmetic surgeries, cosmetic dental procedures, collagen injections,  etc.  I think in some ways changing yourself with surgery or make up is good and bad its good because it can have a positive physiological impact on you and make you feel better about yourself,  it also unfortunately help with your social life and makes you more professional looking.  It can have a positive impact on your health to. I think its bad to because it could have a negative impact on your health and it could look worse than natural beauty.  I think that the significance of the title is that it’s a big symbol of the story because it represents one thing in the Stacy’s life and the opposite in her grandmothers life   

The Second Time Around Text analysis

Authors Note: I am writing a text analysis piece on this book “The Second Time Around” to find out if Nicholas Spencer crashed, was murdered, or if he did it all on purpose.

   In the book “The Second Time Around”, by Mary Higgins Clark, a man name Nicholas Spencer’s plane “crashed.” Or that’s what they say. Everyone else thinks that he set it up because he was a fraud,  because after taking everybody’s money the charismatic con-man announced his anti cancer vaccine was flawed.  Nicholas Spencer disappeared  because he lied and stole people’s money and he does not want to go to jail.

    “He was driving home from New York to Bedford late at night and the accelerator froze in his car.”

(Vivian Powers  Pg. 112) The first possible cause for Nick Spencer’s disappearance is that he was murdered or was an accident. There could be many people out to get Nick because he stole their money when they barley had any left. Now they are poor so you would think they would have quite a grudge against him. The one thing that nobody is looking at, but everyone says is true, is that it was an accident what if it was just truly. Its not like the first time anybody died in a plane accident due to technical difficulties.    

     “The headline proclaiming Spencer’s disappearance was followed in short order with an announcement from the chairman of the board of Gen-Stone that there had been numerous setbacks in the experiments with the vaccine and that it could not be submitted to the FDA for approval in the foreseeable future.”( Carly Decarlo Pg. 1) The second reason for Nick Spencer’s disappearance would be that he staged the plane crash and ran away to Switzerland to avoid going to jail. I think that it’s a possibility because there is so much evidence of people seeing him in Switzerland and  people calling him that it all just seems sketchy.  

          

   “Anyone who had the chance to be with Nick Spencer regularly  would have been very fond of him.”  The third reason he would disappear is because he was guilty and he is really a nice guy at heart. People said in the story he was charismatic obviously the 2 wives he had loved him and his girlfriend had loved him dearly. He had a son who loved him and the people that worked with him said they were very fond of him he was a very nice loving charismatic guy so maybe he just went away so people thought he was dead and they wouldn’t have to worry about him anymore just go on with their lives.

Nick Spencer is either alive or dead and if he is alive he is either feeling really lucky because he isn’t going to jail or really guilty that he took everyone’s money. And if he is dead was it accident or murder? How will we know its not like he is around to tell you either way. But I believe  Nicholas Spencer disappeared either because he lied and stole people’s money.