It was 3 days before my first communion when my mom got me
and my sister into the car and drove us up to David’s Bridal. When we pulled
into the parking lot my first thought was Bridal? Nobody was getting married it
was a first communion not a wedding, so I made sure my mom knew that trust me. My
mom said that they didn’t only have
wedding dresses they had all kinds. “ok.” I said we can see what they have.”
When we walked in the door the store was full of dresses ceiling to floor It
was bonkers!
I didn’t know where
to look they were everywhere all different colors and everything. My mom let me
and my sister go off and look on our own but before she let us go she said.
“You need to get a white dress and Allison you can get any other color except
for white.”That made me heartbroken that I couldn’t get a colorful dress, but I
got over it as soon as I saw all the beautiful dresses they had in white. When
me and my sister parted ways my mom also
looked around even though she knew that she wasn’t getting anything. I went and skimmed through probably thousands of
dresses and finally found a dazzling one.
I knew I had to get it. I ran to go find my
sister to tell her I found the perfect dress as I found her she was looking at
a delightful light green dress she said, “This is the one.” We went to go find my mom and as we found her
she was by wedding dresses and we told
her we found them, the perfect dresses .
Excellent she said, “Let’s go find
Isabelle’s first.” I took my mom to my dress and she grabbed it for me,” Where
is yours Allison?” She asked my sister and we walked across the store so my mom
could get hers. My mom said “you have to
try them on to make sure they fit.” We both went back to the dressing rooms.
When we were done
changing we both opened the doors at the same time, and before we even got out
of the dressing room we looked at each other in amazement. Both
of our dresses looked stunning, we
walked and both twirled to show my mom. She actually started tearing up a little. “You’re
getting so old.” She said (I was 7 years old can you imagine what she’ll do when I graduate.) We finally bought
our dresses and went home making sure to be gentle with them. I was
ecstatic for my big day especially now that I had the best dress.
Aww... such a cute story! This piece didn't have spectacular word choice, or syntactical devices or anything like that and the piece is still stunning. Perhaps because you simply stated the facts the way you saw them as a 7 year old. Superb! I am very impressed!
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